Conscious View Haiku
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Conscious Views
Conscious View Haikus
Emotions lent,
Connection,consent,
Combined event...
Universal light,
Distance of mind's sight,
Cosmic delight...
Senses finessed,
In your heart impressed,
Feelings caressed...
Music for my mind,
Note's meaning of sign,
Directions of rhyme...
Needing wanted,
Of thoughts contorted,
Left unsorted...
Dark needs not fear,
Or seared light endeared,
But only peer...
Level motion,
Removed emotion,
Lost deduction...
Visually,
Deliriously,
Meaningfully...
Conscious essence,
Soulful sought presence,
Coalescence...
Open windows,
Reality shows,
Still brightly glows...
Want not from greed,
From hunger a need,
Left behind, seeds...
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Lovely Haiku,
From Sunshiny View,
Lights through and through...
Thanks Linda.;-))
When I listen to Floyd as I read the poem, I literally breathe in each word.
Brilliant concession of uniquely placed nouns and verbs that flow along with the rhythm of the song. I don't know how you do it Bryan, but every word dictates its purpose here.
Awesome, just awesome.
Jen From An Infinite When,
I Thank You My Friend!;-))
Hi mentalist,what a great hub and here's to many more to come.
I vote up up and away here.
Take care
Eddy.
Eddy:
Thank You For The Cosmic View....
That just about nails it :D
Consider me nailed Elenin.;-))
Oh, no! Is there something you can't write, Prof? Haiku is hard to make and always caused me headache when writing it and still, mine are not good enough. But yours flowing very well. Awesome!
Beautiful, brilliant, and picturesque in the magnificence of Heaven , space, and time. Your work is and art , and beauty and education into the unknown, and into the mysteries of all that is awesome. Merry Christmas our precious friend, and dear heart to us all.
Freya and Leon:
Thank You For Raising My Consciousness!;-))
Beautiful Bryan, My emotions are elevated. Spectacular pictures..Bravo..
Don't forget to take deep breaths at the elevated view Ruby,lol...Thanks.;-))
HaHa, I will remember...
Wow, you are a whiz at cramming so much emotion and thought into so few words. You still got the point across without all the extra fluff. I loved it!
Beautiful, enjoyed this. Merry Christmas
Thank you Ardie and Moonlake for sharing,for me, conscious raising comments.;-))
Merry Christmas.;-))
These 21st century haikus left me cosmically up-lifted. Perfect vid, perfect pics, and on a higher level after the trip. Awesome as always Bryan. Up, awe n beaut. Merry Christmas ole boy!
Mentalist acer
Conscious lucid view Haikus
Sparkling stars in space...
Alaster and Martie...
View of Haiku,
From lifted high views,
My thanks to you...
Thanks Guys.;-))
Wow, fantastic composition.
The music goes well with the photos. Your words astound me. I love the last photo though of the little boy, who appears to be looking out upon a cosmic horizon. : )
Polly and Girltalksshop:
You Cosmic Views Are A Universal Treat...Thanks!;-))
No praise high enough for this. wow
mckbirdbks:
You've made my day sir!;-))
Wow... this is my favourite Haiku so far.
I could frame it - Beautiful layout and photo's.
Thanks. :)
Up and all across but funny. You are so creative Mentalist. So poetic with deep, deep meaning and purpose. A true artist of this age and time. You always leave me speechless pal. I thought about you last night when I was watching the National Geographic Channel. It was a show called "Journey to the end of the Universe". Great show I may add. You should try to catch it if possible. Hope all is well my friend. Take care and Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones. Best wishes.
Lady_E and Ricky:
I've always thought that astronomy should spend a little effort on discovering what is outside our universe(they theorize and have seen side effects on our universe believed from outside our universe)I'll eventually watch this documentary Ricky when it's available on some documentary sites....
Thank You Lady_E for Making My Day!;-))
Wow...this was another beautiful poem from you. Thank you very much for coming to this hub. Take care!
Prasetio
Thank You,
For the Cosmic view....
Have a creative day Pras.;-))
So many poems, feelings, ideas in one hub. My favorite: Senses finessed,
In your heart impressed,
Feelings caressed...
Thank You For Your Senses Expressed Sally!;-))
You have an incredible stance on the unusual. I love your work and am always inspired by it. Thank you for showing me a deeper vision.
Really cool brother! Hey I found this hub I think you may be interested in, see what you think. I think it may be right up your alley. http://greensleeves-hubs.hubpages.com/hub/Astronom
Acaetnna and zzron:
I'm always delighted when I'm able to make an impression...
zzron,I will check this out...thanks.;-))
Another winner, sorry it took so long to get to the hub...but here I am(I blame my Christmas movie tournament). You of course know my thoughts on Pink Floyd. But I think your words and their music make for a powerful experience. I really like the 7th picture down or the purple one....outstanding work...that I am voting up across the board. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas.
Cogerson:
I think I can find some Steampunk photos off of photobucket to post in my next Monday Morning Poem:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steampunk
Melly Cliiistmas Cogelson.;-))
Wow! This is a beautiful and stimulating poem! I'm not one who favors Haiku, but you have masterfully taken charge; and the pics are spot on! Awesome hub!!
Thank you for the stimulating share time2rite....;-))
rhyming haiku to boot!
I'm a firm believer that one can rhyme intelligently in our modern literature...Thanks PDXK.;-))
structured, disciplined and organized. impressed.
Happy New Year, Mentalist acer:)
ya, rhyming is tricky, so I applaud you for doing it so well!
Kim and PDXK:
Thank You Guys For Sharing Your Appreciation.;-))
This was positively amazing.
l just want to go back to the top and read it all again.
This should be bottled and sold as a relaxant.
Thank you so much.
Thank You For The Zenith comment Dim.;-))
Sometimes we are drawn to people and things that bring us peace, balance and centering.
I intend to bookmark to refer often to your expressive words, the pictures which are mesmirizing and the Pink Floyd song, a perfect accompaniment. Voted UP & Awesome.
Happy and peaceful 2012, mar.
Marcoujor...
I thank You for your valued judgement.;-))
no problem, Acer!
I hope you are doing ok my friend. I haven't heard from you in a while. Take care my friend.
Brilliant as always! Well totally amazing and awesome too!
Thinking about you dear friend, and hoping you are well. God Bless You, and may our precious Lord watch over our precious you.
Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago
Sunshine likes this hub
Bryan's words are creations
that make me smile :))