Delirious Rhyme

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By Mentalist acer

Delirious Rhymes

Voices carry unimpeded,the lighted delirium encrypted.

A molecular streaming of unmeasured gestures into poetic code.

Mysterious formations ethereal and essential,

Essentially Breathless,

Essentially Liquid,

Essentially Particular,

Essentially Peculiar,

Essentially Observed,

Essentially Preserved.


An enigma of shining energy that begs to whisper in the dark.

Unrestrained allegra expletives of far becoming near.

Cognitive suggestive purpose of unidentified verse,

Unidentified Conception,

Unidentified Reception,

Unidentified Inflection,

Unidentified Intonation,

Unidentified Perception,

Unidentified Interpretation,

Unidentified Repetition,

Unidentified Excitation.


Coercive nuance amplified from faint impulse,

Then spammed untill an accidental click brings a unique intimacy to page.

Messages recieved an instrumental mess of separate sounds,

Separate Conflicts,

Separate Scenes,

Separate Truths,

Seperate Reality,

Separate Times,

Separate Rhymes....




VOICES CARRY

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DELERIOUS INTONATION

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Debby Bruck profile image

Debby Bruck Level 7 Commenter 22 months ago

Enjoyed. How were the images created?

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Thanks for dropping by and commenting Debby!;)

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Ben Peck 22 months ago

Nice one, you have a great grasp on the science of poetry :)

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Thanks Ben on your appreciative reflection!;)

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tonymac04 22 months ago

Very, very intersting and arresting lines. Thank you. I am also curious about the pix, which are stunning!

Love and peace

Tony

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Pictures of abstract idiology of soundwaves;)

Thanks for the intrest Tonymac!

lxxy profile image

lxxy 22 months ago

Mmmm mmm! "Coercive nuance amplified to faint impulse,"

Loved that line!

Sound waves carry so far...so much...so quickly.

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Then spammed into an unique page with a lucky click...Information overload!!

ralwus 22 months ago

Now I am dizzy. expletive imaging for sure. Kewl.

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ek ellis Level 1 Commenter 22 months ago

Wow love the creativity of your poem, awesome piece

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

A little poem about the little voice inyour head...I'm dizzy too,haha.Thanks for stapping by Rawlus!;)

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Thanks for reading Ek Ellis;)

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valeriebelew Level 2 Commenter 22 months ago

nteresting poetry, and the pictures are also quite interesting. All very high tech stuff, or so it seems to me. (:v

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Abstract voices given meaning...Valerie;)

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Steele Fields Level 2 Commenter 22 months ago

Your poetry is singular and your vocabulary is especially noteworthy.

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Thank you Steel Fields for your enticing comment;)

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smokinchick37 22 months ago

I love the ending of your poem it's right to the point. Very well written

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Deciphering personal conflicts of truth and imagination...Thank for dropping by smokinchick37;)

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epigramman 22 months ago

.....I'm delirious at how well you write and how you can hardwire my 'clockwork orange' ....

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

The conflict of reality and imagination!;)

Thank for stopping by Epigramman;)

Aley Martin profile image

Aley Martin Level 2 Commenter 22 months ago

You are so deep my friend...

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Thanks Teach',coming from you Aley,this makes my day;;))

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fireball* 22 months ago

I like this one...I want to learn how to make a photo like this?..:)

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Thank You Fireball, just go to yahoo images and type abstract or abstract perspevtive, or asbstract whaterver and you'll come up with photos like this...point arrow on picture ,right click mouse, press save image,a folder should appear on screen,press save on that screen and the picture should be saved.When you go to write your hub pick the photo.text,comment,...for your layout,when you get to your layout go to photo capsule and press edit on top of photo capsule,then click my commputer and then click browse,your folder will come up and point arrow on folder then on picture abd press save then press upload image in the capsule on the hubsite and photo will be uploaded and thar's it;;))

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Pamela Kinnaird W Level 6 Commenter 22 months ago

Very creative and the words are an amazing match for your photos - or vica versa.

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 22 months ago

Getting impressive meaning from ordinary concepts,or vice versa,haha;);)

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kaltopsyd Level 1 Commenter 21 months ago

Great, clever use of words. Very nice!

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Freya Cesare Level 4 Commenter 21 months ago

Where I need the scientific feeling in poem, there always Mentalist acer's hubs to visit. :)

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 21 months ago

Thank you for the positive reveiw Kaltopsyd!;)

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 21 months ago

Quantum science is getting to the point that perception of the flesh is not unique!Thank you Freya for your visit;)

hubpageswriter 16 months ago

I agree. Scientific thoughts, feeling and abstract. All combined, great stuff once again, M.A.

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 16 months ago

Thanks for the enticing perception,hubpageswriter.;)

MrDSpade2 16 months ago

This is the most informative well written poem, i've read, well done...

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Mentalist acer Hub Author 16 months ago

Thanks for the peer approval MrDSpade2.;)

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