NATURAL BREATH
58NATURAL BREATH
Natural breath glazing through deserted Marsh grass and muddy water.
Sunlight filtered through Pine and scattered Cypress.
Arrival of peaceful retreat.
Arrival of peaceful horizon.
Arrival of peaceful consent.
Arrival of peaceful scent.
Arrival of peaceful accent.
Arrival of peaceful contentment.
Diving seagulls feeding the disturbance of tugboats struggling to send waves.
Maneuvering into the backwaters images familiar to trained eye emerge,
Tight ripples make shallow bog.
Hanging brush a must for fish.
Know the five o'clock sun.
Headlamp for night.
Headlamp for fog.
Swimming gracefully inch by inch barely noticed,
Saber gator refrains from view while just passing through.
Vista's shelter of constant change
Alto Days,
Staccato Rain,
Absence of carried voices.
Colors continuously organic.
Wind untouched.
Sublimation of needlessness.
Welcomed restfulness.
Wild senses surrounding unafraid,with mutual respect.
Distance now growing furthur from home
Far from strange choices,
Far from arranged spaces,
Far from convenient replacement,
Far from intense movement,
Far from constant faces.
Following further into thickened scene,
Of generous growing blended textures.
Mind of extremes over-taking self.
Mind of extremes projecting abundance.
Mind of extremes daring to be touched.
Mind of extremes green into blue endurance.
Mind of extremes feeling of assurance.
Intellectual design or emergent chaos,
Ambivolent to theory,
Virtue remains. Faint memory of constructed sound,
Deeper still into marshland
Not Lost,
But Found...
MUDDY CYPRESS
CAJUN COUNTRY
CRAWFISH COUNTRY
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My pleasure Raven King.Thanks for the approval!;)
A most entertaining hub! I definitely need to do some more Louisiana type dishes!
..that sexy cajun video is the greatest video of all time - thanks to you - and you do it all - so well!
You're: a) hub pages' resident intellectual
b) a brilliant wordsmith
c) you post 'hot' videos for the lowbrow crowd like me!
d) you're in a class all of your own - first class!
Killer hub awesome video ! !
Love this hub and the cajun cooking, I ain't dead yet!
Nifty@50,your Louisiana dishes are authentic...just this Cajun likes a little spicier than even the locals except in Accadiana around Laffayette...New Orleans and up north are pretty civilized when it comes to hot sauce and cayanne,Lol,thanks for the lovely commpliment;)
I'm de low brow wid yu de Epigramman,haha,as I see you as an equal in all respects and your versatility is on a level that no one can reach,thank for the peer approval;)
Thanks for visiting Cajun Country with me zzron;)
Food isn't the only thing spicy down in Cajun Country...Thanks for enjoying the hub Putz Ballard;);)
Loved this hub., you do it so well.
Louisiana woman, Mississippi man
They get together every time they can
The Mississippi river can,t keep us apart
Too much love in this Louisiana heart.
Too much love in this Mississippi heart
Thank you for the artistic approval always exploring!;)
Wow, very in-depth hub and way of writing. ;) Enjoyed the hub Mentalist! Thanks for sharing your life in Cajun country!
Deep-marsh waters were my backyard play-ground Gwennie's Pen glad you could join me!;)
Mind of extremes projecting abundence.
Mind of extremes daring to be touched.
Mind of extremes green into blue endurance.
and I add:
Mind of extreme Nature
Mind of extreme Purity
You have an Awesome Mind, Mentalist Acer. :)
I really like this one! Very nice and uniquely written... as usual.
Thank for joining me in Cajun Country Lady_E and Kaltipsyd...sorry about the delayed response but my page here have been disabled...UHhhhggg;)
Lovely photographs and relaxing statements. God Bless You.
Thanks for the visit of Accadianna Lee;)
I love all the pictures. Cajun country is the best. Thanks for share with us. Good work as usual.
Thanks for wading through the muddy water with me prasetio,Lol;)
Gotta love the south. Natural breath is a delight and a most pleasant surprise, loved the videos, that accent gets me everytime. I love Cajuns and Louisiana, just a great place to spend some good ole down time. Thanks
Le' Banton Roulet...We let the good times role with good people,food and good times,with the achafalaya as our back yard.Thank for taking a journey into the marsh with me Katiem;)
..I've come back because I'm shallow and just wanna see your sexy Cajun cook again - lol - and also to say when I read your hubs my breathing is not natural - in fact I'm hyperventilating because I know I'm learning good things here - and you make William Buckley Jr. and Stephen Hawking look like Lenny and Squiggy!
..I just scrolled back up to see IF that was a paddle/giant spoon she was holding .....
..wow I almost forgot - your hubs are awesome and thought provoking - and you know the way I write so I'm sincere about this - and I love the other pictures here too - but let's face it - the cook still wins out - hope she knows how to cook and not just look good - but on the other hand let's be honest I don't really care - lol
Haha,Epigramman the Cajuns say Laissez les bon temps rouler,Let the Good Times Roll;)
Another cool creation from you. You are talented, no doubt about it.
Thanks for the cool comments hubpageswriter;)
I have a Filipina friend who married a local man in Lousisiana who cooks cajun now, Nice one, and the images and videos that go with it are alright..Maita
Thanks for wading through the marsh with me prettydarkhorse,as a Trahan I've also enjoyed Bou Coup amounts of Cajun cuizine;)
I enjoyed the poem and reckon I could do some cookin' with those Cajun girls! LOL!
Love and peace
Tony
Louisiana has a little of everything,and then some tonymac,Cajun Women especialy,lol;)
Loved the beautiful sonnet, specially the the last line Not lot, But found! Nature leads us to ourselves! Looking forward to learning more from you!
Raised on the Bayous of Louisiana,I've been rewarded the virtues of nature,thanks for discovering me,Fossillady.;)
"Natural Breath" - the title intrigued me and as I read on I became captivated. Yes, you are brilliant and your talent is in a class of it's own, never to be reached by we mortals. The pictures are magnificent. Thank you for teaching me more about writing with this "breath taking" poem, Mentalalist acer!
Thanks for the meaningful peer review voclcoach!;)
Wow this is great and what incredible pictures too.
From an down-home Cajun I thank you acaetnna.;)
Wow! Nice view, nature and human's view I mean! Tehehe...
When we will have out bound study, Prof? Your description make me want to go there myself.
Yep,as a Cajun,I've grown up with the scenes in this hub and in the marsh,thanks Freya!;)
I had to pay another visit. My favorite of all your exquisite poetry is, of course: "Alto Days,
Tenor Evenings,
Vibrato Thunder,
Staccato Rain,
Crescendo Waves,
Composed Wonder
I love it so!!! VC
Vocalcoach:
Thanks For Conducting This Wonderful Comment:-))
Raven King 21 months ago
Thanks Mentalist Acer for a composed wonder into Cajun Country. :)