Without A Wishful Sigh,Logic Dies
63Cosmic Fuel
Without A Wishful Sigh,Logic Dies
Form,
From inert fuel,
Formula from basic assumption,
Nuance from function,
A cosmic duel with the norm,
Space into place,
Vacuum into volume..
Escape from the base,
Of quantum trace,
Into desiring signature,
Into radiating figures,
Filling cosmically empty structures...
From my book of definitions,
Pages of in-distinctions,
Empty of desirable directions,
Maps needing dissection,
Description needing correction...
Learning to curve,
Learning to swerve,
To sensitize nerves...
Numb,
Zero sum,
Zero sum into some,
Atomic crumbs into love...
Effort,
Effect,
Effort to comfort,
Soul considered concept,
Conceiving senses,
Sensitively dismantling defenses...
Logic's insufficient,
Truth is emotion can be resilient,
Resilient and succulent,
From mentally reluctant,
From fact into feeling,
Beating from reasoning,
Reason into passionately seeing...
Mathematically affectionately,
Calculating appreciatively.
Adding unconditionally...
Logic may not lie,
But it sure can die,
Without adding a wishful sigh....
Cosic Logic Numb
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Thank You Vellur For The Vote Of Confidence.;-))
Nice work Mentalist, but I'm not quite sure what it all means, he sighed. :)
I also liked the video and I nicked one of your pictures for my PC wallpaper, hope you don't mind.
Voted Up and Happy New Year!
Very beautiful hub!
Steve:
Different Lines,Spaces And Times:Everybody is different,Everything Is Good.;-))
Photo Bucket Says It's Ok To Copy Photos,So Go For It.;-))
wallpapersfor:
Thank You,Much Appreciated.;-))
Loved it....especially "Atomic crumbs into love"......
These thoughts could inspire entire hub articles! Again - I love your photos too and they do add when you're reading it...awesome!
Here's the love back at 'chya RealHouseWife...Thanks.;-))
That's a great poem! And the song is of course just 'wow'. I am curious to know if these poems are of any kind of known form or do they portray you own unique style of writing?
Mathematically affectionately? That's new concept for me. never thought the words will be fit one another but turned out nothing is impossible in the world of words, isn't it?
Somehow this poem reminded me of Mr. Data from Star Trek and his journey to understand human emotion; mostly to be able to experiencing love.
Beautiful and very interesting poem, Prof. ^^
Senoritaa:It's mostly Free Form,With A Little Abstract Narrative Except With Rhyme.;-))
Thank You.;-))
Thank You For The Hypnotic Comment Frya...I'm Under Your Spell.;-))
Whenever I want to be mentally challenged, I read your work and it never disappoints. Logic is dying but I have the think the screaming around the world is its funeral dirge.
Logic is fiction, but realism infinite.;-))
Thank You Poetvix.;-))
Sigh, Logic Dies reminds of what I've read a dimension trip courtesy of the Sonoran Desert Toad can deliver- but shoot, who needs those secretions when we've got your emanations Bryan.
Lovely Read - Your photos are always so unique.
Best Wishes. :)
I see you pacing pensively through a rubble of words, tumbling in a scrap heap of old ideas, looking for new fusions, finding only connfusion. . . in the wrong places. For the right reasons. Thank you.
They say that logic is sound reasoning..But who knows for sure? SIGH
Dear Mentalist ~ A perfect way to begin a new year...reading your latest masterpiece. I believe this hub is my favorite. I found especially drawn to the verse :
"Logic's insufficient,
Truth is emotion can be resilient,
Resilient and succulent,
From mentally reluctant,
From fact into feeling,
Beating from reasoning,
Reason into passionately seeing..." How do you do it? Where do these brilliant lines come from? And the photos are spectacular and compliment each verse. Thank you for being a part of hubworld my friend. Sending a New Year's Hug along.
vocalcoach~
With a little help with the alphabet and some fiction I get lucky Vocalcoach I thank you.;-))
Alaster,Lady_E,Moonfroth,Always Exploring...
The greatest battle in the universe...Creativity over Logic.;-))Appreciate the value in your judgments.;-))
Mmmm, my second read now tells me that 'your luck' is much more articulated by your ability to weave the proper words, the most amazing pictures and I am a big ole sucker for Pink Floyd... if this song isn't the best ever!
I am thinking seriously of giving up logic for the new year, so this will also have to be bookmarked.
Voted UP & UABI... a million thanks, mar.
I'm bookmarking your comment with delight marcoujor!;-))
The Floyd venture here along with the intense fusion of words that lead into absent thoughts are incredible.
Just how do you do that? I play the song as I read the words and it is a wonderful escape into another dimension. Thank you.
I have to wonder where you find all your unique photos. They go well with your words of verse...different, unique and intriguing. : ) Voted up, of course.
As Far As I Can Tell I'm Leagally Downloading My Photos From Photo Bucket Jen.;-))
I'm Glad You Like My Verse And Photos.;-))
Girltalksshop:
Photobucket and Imanationalistic realism are my muses..Thank You.;-))
Master piece of a poem with picturesque illustrations and images!Contrats, Mr. Bryan Trahan.
@Focus=@VARA:
@Thank You @Sir!!!
Great pictures, and awesome work. To no surprise it is phenomenol. God Bless You My Friend.
I Appreciate your generous value Leon.;-))
Voted up and all across but funny. Empty and death. Your poetry is so unique Mentalist. I try to view this in your perspecctive, your overall meaning of each poem. Your great depth and detail is like nothing I have ever read or seen. Creative, unique, and talented, so talented. One day, you will get the praise you truly deserve from your poems pal. This is art.
Pink Floyd + Your Hubs = One Fantastic Hub. Another winner Brian. In my opinion this is the best ending that you have written. I really enjoyed this most excellent wishful sigh. Voted up and across the board. You have started off the 2012 year very strong.
Too Bad I Can't Move The Images Like You Can Sir Cogerson...But I Try In My Own Way...Thanks.;-))
Thelyricwriter:Thank You For The Sincere Share.;-))
I hope your New Year Went Well.;-))
I always think I know a word or two until I stop by your place. You build a fortress with words.
I'f Form Ever Equaled Realism Then We'd All Be Equals In The Eye's Of God.;-))Thanks Mckbirdbks.;-))
You are just a martian to me and you know it, but my favorite, although I did get and love the last three lines.
I will push those buttons.
Wishful Sigh As In Pause For Reflection.;-))
Appreciate The Visit Polly.;-))
Amazing Mentalist, it takes a great writer to publish so many of these great poems accompanied with just the right images.
Up up and away without a doubt my friend.
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
Wonderful to hear from you Eddy.;-))
great as usual, Mentalist Acer
The piece offers some stunning single word-images, and the juxtaposition of words to photos is stimulating and provocative. Some of the "rhyming moments" seem merely convenient and easy. Now, do all these bits come together into an aesthetic whole that we might call /Poem/? I'm not sure, because such a judgment requires some sort of measure against which to stand the piece--and I'm not yet sure what that measure should be. As good as the piece is, however, I don't really think it warrants the near-adulation in some of the one-line comments above.
Totally Terriffic Acetnna.;-))
Thank You Moonfroth.;-))
Where have I been to have missed these wondrous words? Awesome and voted up as always.
Gorgeous pictures! Beautiful poem.
Acaetnna:carolinemd21;Words are plenty.Pictures are free...I Appreciate You Guys For Sharing.;-))
*Sigh* This is cosmically powerful :)
this was fun to read. Lots of alliteration and assonance. Great work once again!
Bryan,
I really liked the stanza:
"Logic's insufficient,
Truth is emotion can be resilient,
Resilient and succulent,
From mentally reluctant,
From fact into feeling,
Beating from reasoning,
Reason into passionately seeing..."
It makes me think of the strange loop perception of sentience, like a mirror peering into a mirror.
Thanks for sharing,
Dan
spaces and time
two things I should pay more attention to
vacuum into volume is a line I shall never forget, like you
cheers
kimberly
I really miss you buddy
Vellur Level 7 Commenter 4 months ago
Fantastic pictures indepth words. Excellent hub. Voted Up.